A camper trips on a tree root near the bathhouse and goes down hard. Their wrist is hurt, they think it might be broken, they want EMS. Eighteen months from now, the demand letter arrives. The case is going to be decided by what was written down, photographed, and signed in the first 24 hours after the fall. Almost everything dated more than 48 hours after the incident is valued at near-zero by the adjuster on the other side. The form and the photo discipline below are what actually defend.
Why the first 24 hours decide the rest of the claim
Insurance adjusters apply a specific weight to documentation based on when it was created. A photo taken within an hour of the incident, with metadata intact, is weighted as primary evidence. A photo taken a week later is weighted as informational at best. The same gradient applies to written statements, witness contact details, and condition observations. The reason is straightforward: contemporaneous documentation is hard to fabricate. After-the-fact documentation is easy to slant. Adjusters know this. So do plaintiff's attorneys.
The park's job, the moment a fall is reported, is to create the documentation that holds the original facts in place, before anyone has had time to reconstruct what they remember.
Six photos every fall report needs
- Wide shot of the location showing the surrounding area. This establishes context. Was the area normal foot traffic or an unusual route?
- Close-up of the surface or hazard. The actual cracked pad, the actual exposed root, the actual puddle. This is the single most important photo in the file.
- Lighting condition photo taken from the injured person's approach direction. Was the area lit at the time of the fall? Adjusters care.
- Warning signs present (or noting their absence). If you have a "wet floor" sign in the bathhouse, photograph it in place. If you do not, photograph that too. Honesty in the file beats any version that is constructed later.
- Injured person's footwear (with permission). Flip flops on wet concrete are a different case than rubber-soled shoes on dry concrete.
- Weather conditions if rain, ice, or recent storms are involved. Time-stamped photo of the sky and the ground surface.
The verbatim statement is the most important thing you write
Ask the injured person to describe the fall in their own words. Write down what they say, verbatim, in quotation marks. Do not interpret. Do not summarize. Do not rephrase. The verbatim statement is the single piece of evidence that adjusters and plaintiff's attorneys both treat as primary. If the person later claims something different happened, the verbatim statement from the day of the fall is the anchor.
The common failure point we observe is staff writing summaries like "Guest said she slipped on a wet floor" instead of the verbatim "I was walking out of the shower and my foot just went out from under me, the floor was super wet." The verbatim version has detail that holds up. The summary has a label that can be re-argued.
| What weak documentation looks like | What strong looks like |
|---|---|
| "Guest fell near bathhouse. Said she was OK. EMS not called." | Verbatim quote, three witness names with phone numbers, six photos with timestamps, condition checklist completed, EMS-offered-and-declined documented, signed by reporting staff and manager within 4 hours. |
| One photo of the area. | Six photos covering location, hazard, lighting, footwear, weather, signage. |
| Form filled out three days later from memory. | Form filled out within 4 hours of the incident, while details are fresh. |
Field note: Notify the insurance carrier within 24 hours of any fall, even falls that look minor and even when the person declines medical attention. Late notice is a coverage trigger on most policies; waiting a week to report what looked like a small incident can be the difference between covered and out-of-pocket. The carrier's claims line is in the binder for a reason.
What never to do in the first 24 hours
- Never make an admission of fault. "We should have fixed that" feels like the right human thing to say. It is the wrong legal thing to say. Express concern about the person's wellbeing without speculating about cause.
- Never offer a payment, refund, or comp on the spot. Any of these can later be characterized as an admission. The carrier handles offers.
- Never alter the scene before photographing it. Even if a hazard needs to be made safe immediately, photograph first. Then remediate. Then photograph the remediation. All three rounds of photos go in the file.
- Never tell other staff or other guests details about the incident. The file is shared with the carrier and the attorney. The break room is not.
Free template: slip-and-fall documentation form (PDF)
The PDF below is what we hand out to operators. Incident header, injured person info, witness contact capture, verbatim statement section, condition observation checklist, photo log, injury and medical response, park actions taken, sign-off. Fill in the same day. File with the insurance binder. Email the carrier with the form attached within 24 hours.
Legal and insurance disclaimer
This article and the linked template are provided by Campground Management as an editable starting point for incident documentation. Neither is legal advice nor a substitute for the specific reporting requirements of your insurance policy. Confirm carrier notification timing and required forms with your broker. In any incident involving serious injury, contact your broker and a licensed attorney before making any statements.
About the author
Sean Hakes is the founder of Campground Management. He has spent the last decade walking park incident files with claims adjusters and learning what holds up at year three of a case. Send him a note if you want a hand setting up the documentation protocol for your park.
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